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Orlia Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problemies! hehe :hug:
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
@03:29Which part?x) Haha thanks! I shall work on it and get a better mic..xp Thanks again :D
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
@01:55hehe thanks..:D Yeahp gotsa work on audios..x)
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
I've had comments like that x) sorry my voice is kind of small so it's tough to make it louder. I will find a way on my other films..:D thank you so much ^_^
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MrTiddleywinks Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009
@00:57Ur welcome! No worries. The more you practice the Better you'll be!
Keep it up!!! :hug:
:D
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After 5 weeks, 40 hours a week , finally! It's Done! (Including complete story script, storyboard, research, and voice overs) Hoorah! Here is scene 01! Tiny Glass Shoes is my revised version of Cinderella.


This is my very first flash animation short film. All animation were done in Flash CS3 and all graphics were drawn in Illustrator CS3 with my handy mouse!( I don't have tablet T_T ) ; used Final Cut to add the music and voices. This is for a school project.

Anyway, I am not that happy with this short film of mine. There are so many VISIBLE mistakes in this film. Final Cut destroyed some of my graphics because i don't know what properties i should use for animated files; then there are some camera views that are very awkward. :P Also i was very short with music. I don't have the resources to pay those licenses. Good thing i got to find two background music for free. ^^

By the way, sad to say, this isn't finished. There are four scenes and this is scene one, and to add to that I am stopping this project for now, for i lack so much experience. I might come back to it in a few years time.

I didn't really get to make it that nice because i was having problems with my programs and properties in final cut and flash, then I'm having so much problems technically. I did my best though to make it still presentable... ^^;

Hope you enjoy it! It's 4 mins long i think. :) comments are much appreciated :heart: The next short film will be better.. >_<

: CREDITS :

"The Empty Swing"
Chuck Brown for his piano piece.
-He was kind enough to let me use this.. :D
His site : [link]

"Some Amusing Follies"
- A free mp3.
Site : [link]

Voices

Story Teller: Me
Ocean : Me
Prince : Joseph Pernites
Fall : Patricia Subido
Winter : Faye Umali ( My elder sis :3 )
Stepmother : Faye Umali

Special Mentions

:icontsad: :iconkaiten07: :iconniaryusuke: :iconever2green::iconalben:
Alvin Sarael

Thank Yoouuu! :heart:
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:iconorlia:
Orlia Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
@04:15OMG how did I miss something like this from you? (maybe cause I watch 400+ ppl) ok I'm guilty. Your just full of surprises for me today!!! I love the emotins, their fantastic!!! :) ++++ Your amazing, you know that? :)
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2010
@04:15huwaa! :heart: You never fail to encourage me! :hug: hehe thanks! :D I'm loving animation now :) well..more of character design :D
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Orlia Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
@04:15How do you do it? I don't know where to begin wit animation...can't even draw well still. XP I need to learn anatomy more and esp coloring, digital and all.
I love character design though too. hehe
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2010
@04:15well... i'm not good with anatomy that's for sure. :P Still i got to make one :3 I usually begin with the story, then the character design, then unto flash! heehee. usually my characters and backgrounds are copy pasted from illustrator :3 (I do my digi arts in illustrator for this animation ). sometimes i draw straight in flash.

HOnestly, it's more of patience :)
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Orlia Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
@04:15That's all cool, I'm still amazed.
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2010
Thankies! :heart:
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Orlia Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problemies! hehe :hug:
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jmlbrats Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
Very cool animation. Could I use this for a presentation to HS students on "how to write a research paper"? I would only be using the first 55 seconds and changing the voice. I will credit you of course. Please let me know ASAP!
Thanks,
Jmlbrats
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009
For High school students?? Sure! :) It would be my pleasure. But then, how is it connected to how to write a research paper with this animation?
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mbollutchu Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2009
@04:15this is kinda cute, i like the drawing.. but the audio kinda hurts ;P sometimes it's very silent sometimes it's loud.. but over all it's cute. cinderella? ;P
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2009
@04:15haha yeah. The audio needs a lot of adjustments..x) thank you thank you.. :D i love cute stuff :D haha yeap. my version ;p
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a-chuuu Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
OMG! Why? Why? You're not going to work on this until a couple more years? I was looking forward to a new one... oh well... but I loved it!
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
I need more experience and a new ram for my mac haha Flash is so slowww !~_~. I'm even planning to redo everything and make it a better film ^_^ I'm planning to finish it next year..:)

Thanks so much for your comment...x) it encouraged me not to scrap this project, seriously..>_<
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a-chuuu Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
no problem!
I can't wait for the finished project!!
Good luck on finishing it!!
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009
Haha thanks!:) I might do several short films before i do come back to this..x)
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a-chuuu Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
yay! I will watch all of them
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009
ahw! hehe thanks ^_^
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a-chuuu Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
I really love your cosplay pics too!! meh! So jealous >.< lol. I especially love your Hinata one!
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2009
Huwaa! thank you ^_^ I'm planning to cosplay hinata again. this time with a better hair..x) haha
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a-chuuu Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
@03:29lulz, this part is funny... luv her expression. Good job! Keep working on your voice. (yes... it is a little too soft.)
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
@03:29Which part?x) Haha thanks! I shall work on it and get a better mic..xp Thanks again :D
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UniYuki Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
@01:55Other than the begining sound, it was good.
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
@01:55hehe thanks..:D Yeahp gotsa work on audios..x)
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UniYuki Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
@01:06MAKE IT LOUDER!!!
No offenses to the short, it looked awsome.
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
I've had comments like that x) sorry my voice is kind of small so it's tough to make it louder. I will find a way on my other films..:D thank you so much ^_^
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jamesoliva Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2009
@04:15WOW GALING

/BOW DOWN
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2009
@04:15x3 thankies! haha
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TheSketcher Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2009  Professional General Artist
That, my friend, is 200 hour's worth made of win. @__@ I applaud you.
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2009
haha thank you!!!! *bow*

I'm planning to make a new one, with less hours..;p
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GMNica Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2009
This is really great for your first animation!
I have to buy a digital pen tablet for you.... (something like this [link] ) (khit cheap lng to... xD)

you have to continue drawing/animating and make the best out of it!
i miss your voice.. ^^
:clap:
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009
uy! haha :D Thank you so so much!:D its my first film animation..x3 haha ahw... its the thought that counts... thank you so much!:D though i use mac.. that's why its kinda tough to look for one compatible with it..T_T

THank you so much! I shall neva give up!!! i shall make more..:3

Haha thee tiny itty bitty voice?x3 hehe see you soon! i shall visit :D EK ha!? ;p
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MrTiddleywinks Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
@00:57good film but I kind of had a hard time hearing the narration over the music. but other than that it was pretty good. ^-^
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009
@00:57Huwaa... thank you so much!:D haha sorry.. my voice is very small..x3 i shall do better next time for sure! :boogie:

Thank you thank you! :glomp:
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MrTiddleywinks Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009
@00:57Ur welcome! No worries. The more you practice the Better you'll be!
Keep it up!!! :hug:
:D
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jan-michael9500 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
@04:15shyet ang galeng!
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009
@04:15woi! haha thank you..xD i know kaya mo din yhan!x3
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jan-michael9500 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2009
@04:15not relaly, can do flash to save my life XD
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2009
haha..xD try!!!
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R3dF0x Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
@04:15I like the fact that you are building off a classic story of Cinderella...a great story.

I liked the narration intro, it lead you into the story.

Keep at it, there are many story telling elements missing, your audience needs to identify with the characters. Most know of the story of Cinderella, it's fine to use the story as a base, but there needs to be some sort of twist or uniqueness that sets your story apart.

Perhaps instead of glass slippers maybe special earrings...or make Cinderella the antagonist and tell things from the step sisters point of view...something we haven't seen before :)

you're off to a good start though...
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2009
Thank you so much..:D you're comment encouraged me lots..:D and actually the glass slippers is a pendant..:D

This story isn't done yet.. and I'm stopping it first. I need more research and experience...:)

Thank you Thank you so much..:D I am inspired to finish my next animation fasT! :boogie:
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R3dF0x Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
...^___^
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DivineAscendant Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2009
@04:15Wow you could do anything *_* LOL!

I can't wait for the next ep. the whole thing was surprisingly well made for your animation experience.

But i gotta ask though... what format was this in? swf? mpeg?
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2009
:blush:

hehe thanks ^_^ The next ep. might be next year pa..>_<

Swf then i editted it in final cut..:D
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DivineAscendant Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2009
Oh next year pa? Ok....

I see...final cut pala. Thnx!
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2009
yuhhh what u up to?:3
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DivineAscendant Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009
@04:15A web series... (I think). I'll need it for the practice.

YUSH
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009
woi..O_O show me!
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DivineAscendant Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2009
Sure XD lol. When it's done. I'll upload it.

But for now, I'm still doing the character sheets and voices.
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Shiriel Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2009
coolie!:D
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ArthurT2015 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
@04:15I give you... two thumbs up for this nice and cute animation.
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